Writing Quality and World Background: I see that the world background has been explained together with the writing quality that was vivid. The only problem was that the spacing. There were longer descriptions that needed to be separated. Other than that problem I did have a good time reading it until the lock chapters. Stability of Updates and Story development together with the Character Design: I only have read the free chapters so I can not judge completely however, the free chapters went well. The characters, Lucille and her friend even her family has a good response so far. The only thing that this rating dropped was the stability of updates. . it did not meet the daily required updates or the weekly updates. But it was understandable since all of us are busy doing other stuff aside from writing but over all it was a good read!
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