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i_did_this1stLv14yr
2021-02-07 10:04

Very fascinating story looking forward to see how it ends. Just a little constructive criticism though you keep switching between third person and first person other than that your story is a go. Once this story is polished it'd be a hit. Wonderful plot and settings. I can see the characters growing little by little.

The Girl With The Broken Family

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100 Chs

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I want more chapters Author, you can't leave me on a cliff hanger just like that🙃🙃🙃 There isalot of suspense in this novel and baseon what is happening in the book i have bad feeling towards Munchy and my favorite character so far is Charlie,Carter and Ryan ... Good Work Author🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Sasheena_Lewis
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synopsis is on point!! Description is on point!! Your book is a good look, just keep those chapters coming and we'll be good🤣🤣🤣 I'd read your chapters a million times Author, keep up the good work..... I look to hearing more from you Author✌✌✌✌

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Wow! Another very interesting book. You really have a knack for writing novels with some of the most fascinating plots. Awesome job Author, keep it up!

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Well, the story is very interesting and the plot intrigues me. I am looking forward to the next updates. Good job keep it up! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]>w<

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Right away from the synopsis, one can easily pock interest. I love your selection of character names. I am in love with this book. Bless up. Keep winning. Can't wait for the next and next. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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The emotions I got from just reading the synopsis was enough to make me wonder how things will end up for our lady. Looking forward to more chapters as we go on a journey to a better place for our Fl I hope

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Beautifully written and packed with suspense.You'll cheer for Charlie and ache along with her.Complicated and engrossing, this book has it all ❤️

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I can't stop reading this story... Hahaha I'm currently reading it and it feels like I'm one of the characters that I feel what they feel like it... GOOD JOB AUTHOR~💗

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Great work author, the synopsis was a great read. You pulled me in from the beginning, keep updating because I'd like to read more of the story.👍

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Wow 🤩. This book is lovely and well written. I recommend this book. The brilliance of this novel starts from the beginning. Keep it up author, well done.

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