Review Detail of nethatar in One Piece: King of Desire

5/5 Writing quality: It's good, it's readable, much better than other writers. 5/5 Stability of updates: It's been daily so far, but I prefer quality over quantity. 4/5 Story development: The story so far is in the early stages but I do like what you are planning to do. 4/5 Character development: Once again, the story is in the early stages, but hopefully you can develop the MC and his crew well so we can know their personality's. 4/5 World Background: This story takes place in one piece so it's not completely original, but I do like what you are doing, the fruit works pretty well for this world. -- I'm gonna guess this story is mainly for r-18, but hopefully you can also build the plot well, the fruit is pretty original, I can't remember a fruit like this being used, but if it has, it probably wasn't even used in one piece, so this original, most readers prefer quality over quantity, so instead of always updating daily, why not every 2 days (it could be daily if you think of something good) and make the story better plotwise. Don't feel obligated to always listen to a person's comment, especially if they want you to change the story (to a big degree especially). If you don't feel well, don't feel obligated to always make a chapter. Good Luck!