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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to Eltoxico69

    So what? 100 years for Shinigami is like 10 years for humans, so obviously he forgot something that's like 50 years ago.

    Ch 84 84: Soul Crushing
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    Worst Soul Reaper
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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to bizzaro_GodSage

    Your standards are too high. Especially for a site like webnovel where most novels don't even have a tenth of this author's grammar. Loosen up. I didn't even notice any error's while reading at a regular pace, you probably had to re-read multiple times just for a few small errors.

    "Bingo."
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    Protagonist Killer
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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to bizzaro_GodSage

    Please use proper grammar by capitalizing the first word for every sentence, also make sure to fully spell a word and add a period. Adding managed would make it better. Changing degraded to 'become worse' would also make it look more aesthetically pleasing. Your grammar and spelling has somehow managed to become worse since the last chapter.

    "Bingo."
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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to N0_Hope

    More like it's gonna take a long time, plus it's probably better than manually learning

    I maxed out its level. After that, I put my focus on Amelia.
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    Crossing Dimensions and Capturing Girls as the Sword Hero
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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to BoredAsura

    I'll still keep reading, hopefully you can at least give it a try and see if you can make romance possible? Anyways good luck!

    Anyone got any questions about Ren, his abilities/zanpakuto, the division, or anything else that is going on in the story, don't mind doing a Q&A session.
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    Worst Soul Reaper
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    nethatar3mth
    Replied to flower_gorl

    Personally, I don't mind harem, but it depends on how a writer portrays it, and if it actually seems realistic, I feel that since he's born so long before canon that having multiple lovers/spouses is actually pretty realistic since it would get kind of boring being together with only one person for i guess 1k years?

    Anyone got any questions about Ren, his abilities/zanpakuto, the division, or anything else that is going on in the story, don't mind doing a Q&A session.
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    nethatar3mth
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    There's no romance tag or harem tag, but I'm assuming it's gonna be either just Tier Harribel as romantic interest, or it's gonna be harem, if it's harem, any spoilers on who's in the harem? Is it small, or huge? Hopefully not pokemon collecting since those don't often do too well and so far I'm really liking the story. Also if possible, add some romance chapters? It seems that on this site not many people are good at writing romance, but things like dates are fine, r-18 isn't really needed, (not many can actually write them well anyways)

    Anyone got any questions about Ren, his abilities/zanpakuto, the division, or anything else that is going on in the story, don't mind doing a Q&A session.
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    nethatar4mth
    Replied to frangky

    go to hanime.tv on incognito and go to search, and then search 'master piece'. there is a space.

    Ch 29 Lewd The Loli And The Tsubakiharas.(Slight 18+)
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    Ultimate DxD
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    nethatar4mth
    Posted

    5/5 Writing quality: It's good, it's readable, much better than other writers. 5/5 Stability of updates: It's been daily so far, but I prefer quality over quantity. 4/5 Story development: The story so far is in the early stages but I do like what you are planning to do. 4/5 Character development: Once again, the story is in the early stages, but hopefully you can develop the MC and his crew well so we can know their personality's. 4/5 World Background: This story takes place in one piece so it's not completely original, but I do like what you are doing, the fruit works pretty well for this world. -- I'm gonna guess this story is mainly for r-18, but hopefully you can also build the plot well, the fruit is pretty original, I can't remember a fruit like this being used, but if it has, it probably wasn't even used in one piece, so this original, most readers prefer quality over quantity, so instead of always updating daily, why not every 2 days (it could be daily if you think of something good) and make the story better plotwise. Don't feel obligated to always listen to a person's comment, especially if they want you to change the story (to a big degree especially). If you don't feel well, don't feel obligated to always make a chapter. Good Luck!

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    One Piece: King of Desire
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    nethatar4mth
    Replied to Josh1

    Good luck, I'll return when there's more chapters and more reviews, hopefully you can improve :)

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    Killer Genius ( High school Of The Dead )
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    nethatar4mth
    Posted

    5/5 Writing Quality: It's quite good, better than a lot of other writers. I can actually read this and know what the ****'s going on. 5/5 Stability of Updates: Daily (or almost daily), this is pretty good, but since this is a new story, it's understandable that you want to get a lot of chapters out and build an audience, I'm rooting for you :) 4/5 Story Development: I can't give 5 stars because the story is in the early stages, but I'm really liking it! Really original and a breath of fresh air. 4/5 World Background: This is because it's a mix of anime worlds (not original worlds) but, I do hope to know a lot about the world, like maybe it's politics, who are the strongest existences, factions/powerhouses. -- You might see people complaining because of harem, but ignore them, you did put a harem tag, don't change your novel because of random people who you probably won't ever meet. This novel idea is pretty original, so far I haven't seen this idea be used, but it might have been used. (though even if that is true, I still support you !) Keep up the quality, I'm sure most of us readers prefer better chapters than the amount of them. If you don't feel well, don't feel obligated to force yourself to write a chapter. If you ever hiatus, please tell us, we don't want to just be waiting for a chapter and never getting it, also if you ever feel like dropping the story, how about just taking a break and trying to write a different story and then returning here for later? (best answer for writers block).

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    My Unconventional Delivery System!
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    nethatar4mth
    Posted

    I'm giving 3 stars simply because of the grammar and spelling. The grammar and spelling makes it extremely hard to understand what's going on, maybe try Grammarly or even using auto correct if you use a phone? While I do understand what's going on, it's hard to understand, I also have a feeling you will drop this story like many others who give up, but if you can continue this story and persevere, then props to you, when you improve as a writer and make the story easier to read, I'll update this review! Good Luck!

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    Killer Genius ( High school Of The Dead )
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    nethatar4mth
    Replied to Reign_Bloodark

    Personally, I don't care about them being a virgin or not, but most people who read r-18 want wish fulfillment so they prefer non virgin females, and they prefer that if their character isn't a virgin, that they had a 'terrible' background or something like an abusive spouse.

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    nethatar5mth
    Replied to Legend27

    you need a certain amount of words in the story, I believe it's 15k

    Ch 4 :Prologue 3
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    DXD: I Stand Above All [Dropped]
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    nethatar6mth
    Replied to 5StarGiver

    begone

    'Emerge, that's going to be the keyword.'
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    [Dropped] H Mission Commencing!!
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    nethatar6mth
    Replied to LightuDashu

    so his gf cheats on him?

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    The Betrayed one will end it all
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    nethatar6mth
    Replied to LightuDashu

    netori or netorare?

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    nethatar6mth
    Commented

    That's what they all say.

    How can she act so cute? I want to cuddle her… and eat her. I am definitely not a lolicon, just a connoisseur. Appreciator of beauty. That's right. I am not a lolicon.
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    King of Seven Realms
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