Dear Author, why do you waste such talent in story telling by creating indecisive, bipolar and self righteous characters? Why? This just saddens me how a good story is ruined by stupid choices and thoughts my the character. How can he think of acting a hero when he can barely survive himself? I understand you love humanity a lot but what's the point if the character doesn't act human himself. Humans are not binary. Just worrying about others isn't what makes them good. Circumstances influence a lot of things. Please stop forcing righteous ideals to your characters. Your stories have amazing potential but just ruined by the main characters. I just couldn't bring myself to continue the Arcane Path for this.
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LIKEyay!!! I tried reading his first novel and was disillusioned by the poor continuity in his first novel so I dropped it, I thought I might give this one a chance if the mc was different... sounds like the mc is the same person, so now I don't have to waste any time or coins learning that. thanks chief! đ
I think he the mc that's needs to get over his incierties and grow up a bit. there are a few good women that like the mc. yes his x girlfriend cheated on him with his best friend. he has a few girls since his x girlfriend left him that he could trust but the mc is letting his hangups control his life. I'm disappointed . There are a few good people in there to help the mc but he's messing up by his choices. fix his hangups (mc)
GreedyBoi:mate i feel ur a fan of ruined death knight or HEX aspect of void