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TheGreatest1Lv42yr
2022-06-26 02:16

I had high hopes going into this that it would be a great read but after some time I just noticed the story feeling off from his conversations with people to his actions, He behaves poorly towards everyone but complains when they don't share every issue with him when he wants them to pay for information, He gets in a fight with someone and then complains that they almost killed him, really were they supposed to stay there and let u kill them. I just can not stand this main character story is okay overall but would have been much better with a different main character

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

ExSoldierLv99
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RandomguyinthewayLv12

I agree with you

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michibadgurlLv4

Oh man.. i thought i would give it a try but I’m afraid of disappointment…

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Hell yeah, I thought we would have to wait a whle for another book from you authour-san but releasing a new book the same day you finished the last one. We love you for all you do

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Reveal spoiler

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Mathieu_Ignacio
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is this from a different perspective from from the previous series? (Btw I have them both in my Library on both sites)......................

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GoddnessQueen
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hehe boy !!! :3

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MagikarpBombado
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the book is interesting, but the mc personality is annoying... ( oh my fiancee cheated me, now i don't believe in anyone bcs everyone could betray me...)

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MissIcycel
MissIcycelLv5

Before I dropped this, I thought I should make a review of why. The writing quality is good. Easy to understand. The development of the story is not so okay for me. It was just the MC, meeting survivors, conflicted if he should save them or not, in the end he will still save them. Character design, is pretty much nonexistent. The MC, doesn't develop his character. He's a self righteous man (I wanted to say the word B but that doesn't seem proper). He contradicts himself at every turn. He said he wants to be alone, but at every chapter, he's either with some survivor or some survivor. I have a long list of complaints of this but I won't detail that much. Updating stability, don't know but with the number of chapters the stability of updating looks good. World background, the settings was super slowly being revealed. The monsters, the why's, etc. I would have rated this 2 stars but since I like some aspects of the story I rated it 3 stars.

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Shoab_Ahamed
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Honestly it's a pretty good novel and recommend everyone to read it but if there is one thing I am dissatisfied with that would be main characters personality. I mean it's alright that he want's to alone but he goes too extreme. He became angry when he lost a fight or someone looks down on him. It's kinda like those annoying xianxia young master attitude. It doesn't make sense that he create all this fuss since he only trained for two months and they are stronger than them. I have no problem with his lone wolf 🐺 personality but I do not like those childish attitude where he is harsh all the time. Anyway this a good novel. Keep up the good work.

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JustMortal
JustMortalLv11

Im giving 3 Star cuz I haven't read it yet :) just hoping it's better than your previous novel :). I hope the mc is not stupid or naive or being controlled by others :)

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Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2

Is this supposed to be romance because that’s what the tag says. Hopefully he doesn’t get back together with that mia bitch tbh even though yh she made a mistake it doesn’t change the facts she slept with his best friend tbh if they end up back together this novels will just have a shit ending hopefully the author Doesn’t do that. All his anger and everything just pointless then

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