Review Detail of Littlepunnie in Cold Hearted Devil Fell In Love

Hello! I'm curious about the female lead's background, reminds me of Ning Xi, and the male lead kinda reminds me of Jin Liwei, so it's a plus point :wink. Your writing style was lined with 'on spot ' and no to dilly-dallying. There were minimal errors in terms of grammar and capitalization. I suggest you to hand in some transition words? It will help your book to be flowy! I've only read 6 chapters , so I am not profound with concluding about the story development. Anyways, the story plot was, wow. You made me read it with your own unique style of expressing your story. ( By the way, I would like to advice you in writing the expressions, and the tone of voice for your characters? Minimal but not lacking. But overall, goodies(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤!) There were some parts where I was confused but, then again, I was back on track bbecause, it really was quite intriguing. I am hoping to know more about the female lead Ivy, and Noah! Also, I'm hoping- hoping- to read some spicy love triangle ( if there are ) since Ivy's personality kinda makes everyone be well and open to her. She is a sunny, domineering lady in my eyes adorned with glasses XD. This is a MUST read! I'll look forward to your journey as a writer! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤