Decent story at best. The main problem with the story lies with the Main Character's trigger-happy attitude, and his arrogance/stupidity. In a world where having secret cards to play is literally game-changing (as shown by MC in the original story), he openly tells people and brags about it. Also, the author is (ironically) giving the antagonists extremely high IQ able to deduce the Main Character's dual spirits and his second spirit in seconds (even before the character starts flexing it everywhere). You don't simply guess that a spirit ring is his second spirit. I can understand Yu Xiaogang guessing it because he focuses on studying spirits, but the majority of characters in the world are more battle-focused muscle heads otherwise Xiaogang wouldn't be famed for being the literal best theoretician and knowledge bank in the field of spirit beasts (as wiki states). TLDR: The author grossly overestimates most characters' IQ while making the main character only know how to arrogantly charge forward with a "you die or I die" attitude.
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