Review Detail of Sunny_Dream in TO BE FORGOTTEN

It has potential, but the story is hurried. It look like a summary of what the story should have been. Also the main character win a lot of exp doing nothing but quests, at least make him train a bit... I know its a system fic but I can't help to think that everything is given to him without him working for it (20 level for eating a fruit ? don't count it as an exp giving item but a skill giving one!).