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As any cultured author I have mastered the ‘Dao of Shamelessness’ thus I shall reward myself with a 5 star review. Overall it will be a journey of an OC MC with his crew venturing through the seas of One Piece to become the next Pirate King, simple. I intend to give my OC crew members a decent background and personality, alongside a goal, I have read many fan fics that just introduced an OC but we barely know anything about them. They just blindly follow 'just cuz'. Other than that, it is my first book, I appreciate constructive reviews but I will remove troll reviews. Thanks for reading!
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2 is too low in my opinion for the One Piece world, but keep at what you decide otherwise it will become harder for you to write if you start changing things depending on other person opinion. You didn't answer about the canon part, will the MC keep things similar or will he change things? like recruiting original member of luffy's crew or killing villain that should have been fought by luffy if he meet them before him?
Paradox_:I saw a questioning refering to romance, accidently deleted it thinking it was a double review. As for the answer, I am adding some romance, 2 lovers at most. This is my first book, and I’m not that good with romance. So small harem I guess?
Paradox_:I saw a questioning refering to romance, accidently deleted it thinking it was a double review. As for the answer, I am adding some romance, 2 lovers at most. This is my first book, and I’m not that good with romance. So small harem I guess?
Yes, I will change up cannon. Luffy, being the world’s protagonist will surely still find his way to the same or even higher strength. As for crew, he will recruit Robin for obvious reasons as it said in the second chapter but that’s about it.
Ryofu:2 is too low in my opinion for the One Piece world, but keep at what you decide otherwise it will become harder for you to write if you start changing things depending on other person opinion. You didn't answer about the canon part, will the MC keep things similar or will he change things? like recruiting original member of luffy's crew or killing villain that should have been fought by luffy if he meet them before him?
Paradox_:Yes, I will change up cannon. Luffy, being the world’s protagonist will surely still find his way to the same or even higher strength. As for crew, he will recruit Robin for obvious reasons as it said in the second chapter but that’s about it.
