Review Detail of Gaureeey in The Lord of Evil Spirit Pets
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1. PLEASE CONTINUE 2. LONg SAN MARRY ME PLIS 3. love the constant tone maintained. 4.8 stars because i want more chapters!! ----------TIP------- cut down on sentences a little ! theres only so much you can determine from a single chapter but this broadcasted ur abilities as a writer, voila!
The Lord of Evil Spirit Pets
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Chapter is pretty long yes. Maybe you can break them into two. But otherwise its great. Keep updating regularly ,you will do well.
RazorIsSharp:can you clarify what you mean by sentence length? (Do you mean the chapter is quite long) Other than that, thank you for the review!
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Haha, thank you for the clarification. I was beginning to worry it was something else like my writing style she was talking about. Next chapter, it will be much shorter :). Appreciate the feedback.
Aaliyah_Stark_:Chapter is pretty long yes. Maybe you can break them into two. But otherwise its great. Keep updating regularly ,you will do well.
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RazorIsSharp:Haha, thank you for the clarification. I was beginning to worry it was something else like my writing style she was talking about. Next chapter, it will be much shorter :). Appreciate the feedback.