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belfegore
belfegoreLv39mth
2024-08-15 17:10

My conclusion after chapter 300: the story is interesting, although completely different to what I imagined after reading the synopsis. There are exciting moments, some funny ones, but also some that make you think. What I don't like, however, is 1. the character portrayal of Azzy. He seems to have no personality at all and lets people do whatever they want with him. The only thing he has is arrogance, incompetence (e.g. as disciplinary chairman) and laziness (he lets learn his arcane for him). The Reaper always says that he wants to get him used to it by having strong opponents, but they never come. 2. the relationship with Claire is just awful. She is absolutely obsessed with Azzy and incredibly immature. The only good thing is that she knows it herself. Unfortunately, there has never been a character change so far. 3. the constant jumps in time. Why doesn't the author just write chronologically, but keeps jumping back minutes, hours or weeks to introduce a situation. This makes the story unnecessarily complicated and massively disrupts the flow of reading. 4. Azzy isn't really OP. He just got lucky because of the Reaper. If others had the same resources, they would be just as strong, if not stronger than him. 5. the story with the Galarian King (Beast). It makes no sense why Leo (Beast) wasn't discovered and when Vann (Beast) was killed, no one seemed to care. This story is not only illogical, it was simply dropped.

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belfegore
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Read up to chapter 481 and then stopped. After Azzy returns to his timeline, the story no longer makes sense. The scenes are fragmented, you get the feeling that chapters are missing, letting Azzy continue to be OP is nonsense. Lea should at least have been stronger than him. And now Upiar is the evil wizard from Aladdin..... No thanks![img=disgusted]

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Snowstar
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Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432. There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6. 1) MC will stay as OP as ever 2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party. 3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421. 4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story. 5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5. 6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters. 7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead. 8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing. 9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day. 10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you. 11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments. * Thank you *

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