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SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv33yrSageOfSins

EXTREME WARNING!!! the quality of the fic is good with only minor grammatical issues but the characterization of mc and his roles in the MHA is such a cliche that borders on fanatical worshippment of All might ... and MC is a goody two shoes that needs to grow a pair cause when someone comes with killing intent, you don't leave them alone...no you kill that son of bitch in such gruesome way that the rest won't ever think of u again in their lifetime... Anyway the premise of Standuser in MHa is unique but the author has nerf the strength of Star platinum ( don't disrespect a franchise by ruining their character and still talk shit about u being fan of that franchise ) which in jojo could rope the body of anyone in pieces and this carbon copy uses all his strength and just breaks some bones or send some goons flying for couple metres. WTF .... do u even watch jojo or is ur brain so small that you can't comprehend the power level of JoJo verse characters.

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In MHA with Star Platinum

blazuki

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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Thanks for the review. I hate extreme goody 2 shoes main characters. The only hero I can tolerate is batman, and the only reason is that he is ruthless and breaks the bones of all the criminals rather than killing them which is kinda worst. And if anyone says he doesn't kill he is a pussy. Well, Batman did say that he wanted to kill the scum many times but he resisted because if he starts killing then he won't stop ever. It would be damn scary for batman start a killing spree in Gotham, he would be a damn scary killing machine. Perhaps it's for the best for batman only breaking criminal bones.

blazuki
blazukiAuthorblazuki

It's not nerfing, but holding back

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

that's the same as nerfing,

blazuki:It's not nerfing, but holding back
blazuki
blazukiAuthorblazuki

How?

asaade_ragnarokm:that's the same as nerfing,
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

holding back = doesn't used full power = nerfed how many times you will make him hold back his power thats the same as being nerfed

blazuki:How?
blazuki
blazukiAuthorblazuki

Nerfed = not able to use his full power = getting weaker for the plot. Holding back= NOT getting weaker = holding back for the sake of some reason. But if you're the type who thinks himself always right, go ahead and believe whatever you want.

asaade_ragnarokm:holding back = doesn't used full power = nerfed how many times you will make him hold back his power thats the same as being nerfed
Electrum_Eli
Electrum_EliLv4Electrum_Eli

I think you're retarded

asaade_ragnarokm:holding back = doesn't used full power = nerfed how many times you will make him hold back his power thats the same as being nerfed
OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10OhhhhNooo

Here i thought i actually had a partner in crime only to find out you half assed it all.

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

i think your whole family is retarded

Electrum_Eli:I think you're retarded
Electrum_Eli
Electrum_EliLv4Electrum_Eli

Really? Your Mom said he dropped you 69 times when she's pregnant. That why you're retarded

asaade_ragnarokm:i think your whole family is retarded
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

oh no wonder youre retarded how did she dropped the baby when it was inside her body?? tsk tsk i understand why youre retarded its actually run in the family it all starts from your ancestor who likes to **** his own mother and apparently it became a tradition in your family and there you goes an inbred retard

Electrum_Eli:Really? Your Mom said he dropped you 69 times when she's pregnant. That why you're retarded
Electrum_Eli
Electrum_EliLv4Electrum_Eli

I think you need to go to the mental hospital or get some doctor to see if you're super idiot, Even some things like a dropping baby you didn't know

asaade_ragnarokm:oh no wonder youre retarded how did she dropped the baby when it was inside her body?? tsk tsk i understand why youre retarded its actually run in the family it all starts from your ancestor who likes to **** his own mother and apparently it became a tradition in your family and there you goes an inbred retard
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

waw what a super retard so i was dropped then put it back again and then dropped then put it back again waw really waw don't compared your own experience to others, i know your whole family is retarded and probably this incredible and almost impossible things probably your own inbred family can only ever do clap clap clap

Electrum_Eli:I think you need to go to the mental hospital or get some doctor to see if you're super idiot, Even some things like a dropping baby you didn't know
Electrum_Eli
Electrum_EliLv4Electrum_Eli

You know what your fucking stupid, You should get a fucking mental health doctor for your brain. I don't want to argue to a Retarded

asaade_ragnarokm:waw what a super retard so i was dropped then put it back again and then dropped then put it back again waw really waw don't compared your own experience to others, i know your whole family is retarded and probably this incredible and almost impossible things probably your own inbred family can only ever do clap clap clap
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

haha we already established that your whole family is retarded no need to repeat it

Electrum_Eli:You know what your fucking stupid, You should get a fucking mental health doctor for your brain. I don't want to argue to a Retarded
JohnnieWalker
JohnnieWalkerLv4JohnnieWalker

mans this fics where the mc doesnt kill enemies make no sense

Zaitro
ZaitroLv12Zaitro

Holding back for some reason is the same as being unable to use the full power. If someone holds back by own purpose, then its "holding back", but when the author holds back the MC powers its not holding back, its NERFING.

blazuki:Nerfed = not able to use his full power = getting weaker for the plot. Holding back= NOT getting weaker = holding back for the sake of some reason. But if you're the type who thinks himself always right, go ahead and believe whatever you want.
keke171
keke171Lv4keke171

they are very different ... being unable to use full power is different from NERF because unable means that you may still be able to use full power under a circumstance or simple don't want to use it on that occasion, NERF is like turning a high caliber revolver that can dismember someone into a Glock with rubber bullets permanently. HOLDING BACK or is to use that same high caliber revolver skilfully on the ends of someone's body to pass from scraping hurting / immobilizing them without killing or dismembering or other permanent damage, using a part of the total potential of the revolver. as the author is HOLDING BACK in the force of star platinum, it means that he can still use the full force and blow someone up, maybe stop time or even overwrite reality as DIO's over heaven the world if he had NERFED it means that none of these would be possible anymore, the author would have to find another way to strengthen the MC in case he has a very strong enemy

Zaitro:Holding back for some reason is the same as being unable to use the full power. If someone holds back by own purpose, then its "holding back", but when the author holds back the MC powers its not holding back, its NERFING.
Zaitro
ZaitroLv12Zaitro

MC tried to stop time before and was unable to do it. And for your information, a nerf not necessarily needs to be permanently. Someone can get its powers sealed due to abuse of them, that's nerfing; and then just recovery them.

keke171:they are very different ... being unable to use full power is different from NERF because unable means that you may still be able to use full power under a circumstance or simple don't want to use it on that occasion, NERF is like turning a high caliber revolver that can dismember someone into a Glock with rubber bullets permanently. HOLDING BACK or is to use that same high caliber revolver skilfully on the ends of someone's body to pass from scraping hurting / immobilizing them without killing or dismembering or other permanent damage, using a part of the total potential of the revolver. as the author is HOLDING BACK in the force of star platinum, it means that he can still use the full force and blow someone up, maybe stop time or even overwrite reality as DIO's over heaven the world if he had NERFED it means that none of these would be possible anymore, the author would have to find another way to strengthen the MC in case he has a very strong enemy
Jorzy_Gorp
Jorzy_GorpLv3Jorzy_Gorp

Do remember the mc was watching the ova fight and he didn’t get to see how jotaro stoped time so it’s all experimental right now

Zaitro:MC tried to stop time before and was unable to do it. And for your information, a nerf not necessarily needs to be permanently. Someone can get its powers sealed due to abuse of them, that's nerfing; and then just recovery them.
blazuki
blazukiAuthorblazuki

Nope, he saw Jotaro stopping time and kicking Dio's leg. But he died in their final clash.

Jorzy_Gorp:Do remember the mc was watching the ova fight and he didn’t get to see how jotaro stoped time so it’s all experimental right now