Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in Unleash The Assassin [BL]

The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.