Review Detail of Swisstoast in Re:Ron - Life Of A Reincarnated Sidekick
Review detail
Read up to chap. 7. Love it so far, Only thing is knocked 1 star off writing due to putting "Kim:" or "Me:" in front of the dialogue instead of writing something like "Kim yells to me" or "I whispered to Kim" or something similar. I know it's probably so readers don't get confused who's speaking if there are more than 3 people, but it makes it read more like a screenplay or a script rather than a fiction story. Anyway, if you work on that aspect it'd be perfect.
Re:Ron - Life Of A Reincarnated Sidekick
PopPop
Liked by 1 people
LIKEReplies4
That's fine. It's a minor point anyway that won't really stop me from reading. Just thought I should explain it as it's the reason I took off a star since it's something similar that's only used in scripts/screenplays.
PopPop:Ehh, it's more for my benefit than the readers since I'm not trying to be a writer. xD. Making out this story helps to alleviate my boredom while I wait for my favorite stories to update. And if there are other bored people who want to read, then even better! :)
Swisstoast:That's fine. It's a minor point anyway that won't really stop me from reading. Just thought I should explain it as it's the reason I took off a star since it's something similar that's only used in scripts/screenplays.
I'll take all the curses you give if it leads to the author improving in their writing, even if it's just breaking a bad writing habit. [img=recommend]
PopPop:Ch. 22 is your fault. Curses to you!!image