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Professor_Zzyzx
Professor_ZzyzxLv33yr
2021-02-09 01:17

In my opinion this is Easily one of the worst types of Fanfiction possible. It’s takes a great story and twists it into something it was never meant to be. I never thought anyone could make a Kim Possible story so messed up. I get your going for realism, but it’s literally a Disney series! Why would you even go this direction? When I saw the harem tag I knew what I was getting into, but what’s with the forced edginess and out of place BS. Kim being used to hide a weapons smuggler without her figuring it out and Bonnie’s sisters almost getting r*ped aside, you actually went out of your way to ruin Britania, the pop idol from the show just for the **** of it. And you didn’t even explain why her life is so different from the actual series. Instead, according to you, it should have always been this way based on the way her mom and ‘agent’ acted. And was there a need for the mention of her week long gang r*pe experience. I honestly can’t believe I have to say it. That kind of shit doesn’t belong in a Kim Possible story. FFS, it was bad enough to have it mentioned that her mom was ok with this, but having her dad just ignore her because her moms a bitch was the last straw for me. It’s just so unrealistic and gratuitous for the sake of plot I just couldn’t read any more. I do get it that some people In the worst possible serious of events could experience this, but who wants to see that in a Kim Possible story? I came to this novel for an enjoyable ride down memory lane with maybe alittle harem side story as a bonus since why not right? Instead I get some seriously messed up, angst ridden BS that makes me feel sick to my stomach with a plot so forced I was compelled to right a review about it just to vent my grievances. Of course There are still things I liked about this story, I loved Kim Possible after all, but it’s just not enough for me to keep reading it and I really wish I stoped sooner when I first saw the flags. If you don’t mind some edginess and occasional gratuitous realism thrown over your childhood joys then you may actually like this. In fact many will love it for that very reason. I for one, do not. Also I feel like I need to point this out since it’s a Ron fic, Rufus feels like an after thought in this story and his parents a dicks for no real reason. Just saying, it’s weird.

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Professor_Zzyzx
Professor_ZzyzxLv3

This was more mean sprites than I thought it would be. I apologize. This is still a good story. It’s developments simply through me for a loop. Even still that’s no reason to act like a douche towards someone’s hard work. I will say I rather enjoy the humour and personality of the MC. He is quite charming and it’s pretty endearing to read. Especially with the proper grammar and nearly perfect spelling. Which is rare for sites like this.

3yr
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Dioseethis
DioseethisLv6

I don't want others to be like me thinking this is might actually be a decent read. It's not. It's pretty f*cking garbage. If you're looking for a decent Kim possible fanfic go read something else this isn't it. Don't be fooled by the good reviews as they most give it a five because of an idea of Kim possible harem fic. Even I should not have trusted this horny people. Review: Writing quality- it's pretty decent for a fanfic. Few grammar errors here and there and most of the time the dialogue is quite cringe but still decent nonetheless, for a fanfic. Can be easily fix with few edits and better dialogue. Story development- its pretty sh*t. The pacing is quite weird as it jump from one place to another without rhyme or reason. It can be quite confusing at times. And the author is doing the most no no thing as an author, telling not showing. Most of the adventures are just briefly mentioned even though it's one of the thing that made Kim possible great. Remember SHOW DON'T TELL. Characters is thrown in or out without explanation or story behind them. That's boring and an example of what an author shouldn't do. Character design- it's quite insulting honestly. Most characters are the p*rn version of themselves so they are horny sl*ts. You'd think that's a good thing but the smut is lackluster and can't really save this fic. If you like the original Kim possible characters then you'll probably be insulted by how they're portrayed here. Updating stability- doesn't update everyday but still alright. World Background- I'm pretty sure the author is jacking off to Kim possible p*rno when he thought of this fanfic. This is not a Kim possible fanfic, this is a Kim possible P*RNO fanfic. You'd think that's quite hot but the smut is so boring I couldn't get a hard on. If you're looking for a smut Kim possible I suggest you look for something else cause you'll just be disappointed. Every character is a sl*t one way or another and the author doesn't really build the world so in this aspect is pretty garbage too. I wouldn't be surprised if the author decided to cuck Ron, oh wait he did already. *SPOILER* Bonnie and Tara is in a relationship before they have a relationship with Ron and they still are even now that they're in a relationship with Ron(even though Bonnie love Ron since they were child and Ron love her, basically Tara got first) . This is not a harem this is an open relationship. I repeat, THAT IS NOT A HAREM THAT IS AN OPEN RELATIONSHIP. Too many people mistake that sh*t. Tlrd: if you're looking for a decent Kim possible fanfic this isn't it. But if you want garbage pacing, characterization, and plot with a dose of a poorly written smut then this book is for you. It's a shame really, the first few chapters are actually decent and has thought put into it but then it became more and more mess up and started sh*tting on the original beloved cartoon. Let's hope the author don't delete this review so that the others will know what they are signing up for.

3yr

Jayology
JayologyLv11

The Author has done a great job telling this story while still maintaining Rons persona very well..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
belier
belierLv4

you get 5 stars for evening having the idea to make this. ............................................................... .......... .. ...s

3yr
v29
v29Lv14

I like the story and the writing. It looks like this will be an interesting novel. I look forward to your work. I would recommend reading this novel.

3yr
Fk_Fk
Fk_FkLv4

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3yr
t650825t
t650825tLv5

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3yr
Red_Spice
Red_SpiceLv4

Thats really adorable! Even though some of the writings are in a little bit of mess, story itself is really good.You should also work a little bit on dialogues.

3yr
Alexander_the_grey
Alexander_the_greyLv5

I’m kinda excited to see where this is going to go. It’s fun that you actually see Ron, but better. Brings back memories of childhood as i read and hope you can keep going with this. It’ll be funny to see if Shego gets roped into his developping harem. Overall, fun read and good job writing this fanfic.

3yr
BlackPolar
BlackPolarLv10

This has to be, without a doubt, in my cold black heart, my favorite fanfic on here; I wish you health and luck. I will continue to wait for more news on this beautiful story. Thank you, much love

3yr
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