Item: Days with My Sergeant
Rating: 3.4
Author: Alisa_Leslie269

Alisa_Leslie269Lv24yr

2021-02-03 07:52

Though the writing quality is a bit poor in terms of the tenses used the book has enormous potential and would be an amazingly good book with a bit of editing and grammar correction.A lovely read though and a nice tale 😊

Days with My Sergeant

Miss Eryl

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Miss_ErylLv1

Hi, thanks for the review. I know that I am not fluent in English and English is not my first language... But I can't say it's too poor 😊😊 I'm working on the typos error and grammar mistakes if there's still have 😊😉

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