Review Detail of namorai in Mass Effect: Project Chimera

this is a good start on a story that has a twist, and it is fleshed out good enough to hook you in. the combinations of universes that support each-other while being believable and sounds like it could actually happen, is innovating enough to be firm, and follow the lore close enough to balance both the technology and development of the world. the sentences need more structure, commas, and above all, MORE CHAPTERS!