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namorai10mthCommentedCh 20 The Citadel IX- namorai1yrPosted
this is a good start on a story that has a twist, and it is fleshed out good enough to hook you in. the combinations of universes that support each-other while being believable and sounds like it could actually happen, is innovating enough to be firm, and follow the lore close enough to balance both the technology and development of the world. the sentences need more structure, commas, and above all, MORE CHAPTERS!
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Glemt do mean forgotten. from norway here ^^
[A/n: Just a reminder, Glymet is the protagonist from The Elder Scrolls: Legends story mode, the Forgotten Hero. He is a human with an ambiguous race and his name is derived from the Norwegian word "Glemt" which means Forgotten… according to google translate…] - namorai2yrCommentedCh 1019 Su Yiren
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this process can LEAVE him....
This sounded like a suicide plan, but his body needed a lot of energy that could not be replenished by just a handful of level nine spirit arrays and elixirs. His plan was to use the strongest and the purest form of spirit energy, the heavenly lightning to cast his organs on the spot. This process can live him in a vegetable state but he was willing to take the risk. - namorai2yrCommentedCh 142 Updated Later
- namorai2yrCommentedCh 18 Progression [Bonus chapter]
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finish the sentence pls
"It seems they arrived ahead of Artemio and Paolo, so they escaped speculation." Ian explained as he reviewed the reports sent by their people at Constellations. Earlier on that day Cedric had installed people to watch over the - namorai3yrCommented
it's called mane
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both of them are on GUARD against any attacks.
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trial
Having done his morning exercise, dressed and eaten, Eldrian opened the forum to see the reaction to the trail/hearing. While at it he also sent Erik a message asking if he had tried logging back in at the same time. - namorai3yrCommented
"You would normally deal with problems in a very clever and organized fashion, but as long as a child is involved, you would immediately turn into a different person, taking the initiative to bear the burden as the protector without even bother asking if the other party needed protection." remove the you in the sentence but as long as you a child is involved
"You would normally deal with problems in a very clever and organized fashion, but as long as you a child is involved, you would immediately turn into a different person, taking the initiative to bear the burden as the protector without even bother asking if the other party needed protection." - namorai3yrCommented
"Someone like you doesn't deserve to live."
"Someone like you doesn't deserve to like," Xia Fei coldly remarked.