Review Detail of amaturewriter in ERROR12
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Author removes reviews...OG rating 3 but now 1. Also all the other reviews are his own accounts cause they all only rated his other bk, and , probably will change or remove after reading this. . pathetic So 10 chps in this bk, reading it feels like its an OG than an FF. And whilst normally that'd be interesting for a bk of this plot [ our world people go to other worlds cause of a ' reason ' ], the way its written it feels as though I should know the characters before, [ not saying its unexplained ] just feels like that. and the characters them selves are bland and so is the world. 10 chps and theres barely anything of anything. fighting, some para, character interactions they just talk, and its about the system and what happens. And you have massive timeskip of 2 yr and 8 yr and its rushed. no character development to be felt. this is what ruins it. a 10 yr time skip that takes out a chuck of character interactions and CD. i mean 13 chps and MC dosnt even have a proper purpose or goals. Then theres the fact that C4 to C8 are system explanations and workings...u have 4 chps dedicated to it whilst only some paragraphs dedicated to timeskips [ which is more or less in 1 chp ]. And C4 to C9 atleast 30 % to 40 % of it was stats and the rest was explanations. [ and this trained continues in later chps like C11 ]. Theres also the fact that shit like CAD's are added to the world in C12 and this completely ruins it cause this is supposed to be world development, but its not there, its just listed and explained. no development of how the world adjusted and shit. point I am trying to make is its bland and shit is just added [ not saying its not explained ]...just it feels bland and empty. like the clans, power system of CAD the characters, and their interactions. plus they are barely explored. Then theres the fact that before the chps were about MC being alone for 10 yrs and then in C 11 or C 12 everyone comes from other world and everything is normal, people are all fine and dandy, and there are the powers and clans and all that shit, its introduced but u dont what happened. like shit, these people just came and is all clam? I mean u need decades atleast to clear up what happens, shit just dosnt fix normaly when everyone is given power and everyone leaves the world for 10 yrs. basically the story for me, is like a lego set of one thing, with pieces of other multiple sets but no instructions or anything. idk, the analogy is stupid but fk that what I feel. point is, the story is all over the place and whilst explanations are clearly there, its all bland and clustered. . . . .
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HA KIDDO! Change topic kiddo. It is more convincing to me that your the one using clone from your like count. Its a mystery why someone like it. So go report if you want. by the way, I'll just remind you, don't push your nonsense logic on other people, because it is their life not you.
amaturewriter:And look ur ass is there defending and telling a person not to review. Lolimage
ok I will do a review on your review. first of all, I guess your just only reading FF and didn't know about CAD and Everyone else is a returnee, second why force something like delete review where author is new one. I simply don't get it, even commenting on other reviews where seems to be a tantrum to me. Next is I invited you on discord to see if you are kind enough to confirm by yourself if it is a fake, or review made from her friends which I guess you don't have friends to put a review to help a new author. Specially when you are also a author, don't push your ideals to other person.
it is fair, it is because I know and interacted with the author in discord. Second, I invited him to discord to prove it but he doesn't want. Third is, he accusing me or might be you also for a fake account lol, old webnovel readers have know some site that can help them in reading which I will not say. (They can guess what I mean) next, you can't base on chat alone, I can easily make a thousand of book read in the profile but i am lazy and also I'm confident that I have read more than tens of thousands of webnovel chapters where it is either in RAWS, or other site and lastly why he need to keeps saying DUMBASS, petty and even he showed up in this FF. If he don't like it, he can go. Or he wanted to satisfy his ego, I have interacted with different people, and half of the people who like to find trouble are definitely needed attention.
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Like I don't even know what is happening in the comment section for your review the two people are talking about something else.
amaturewriter:your profile pic dosnt make sense, is it a mask or a black skull? who knows?image
bro.. I was joking. as for the people,. only history is in one author and rest all are spam? PLus they were all inactive for months till now? lol, they all fake accounts
TOFIE:Like I don't even know what is happening in the comment section for your review the two people are talking about something else.
Hmm, I don't know GTX on discord, but there are also few people that author DM'd in discord. That is why I keep asking the guy to join, but he didn't even listen and told me a DUMBASS. I already got told to not reply on that guy as there is nothing can do and respect it's idea.
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I just read the one from GTX. Yeah, authors can ask from relatives or family which I think most of them asked their families and even friends to support, and I see there that there is no problem on it. gtg, I still need to grind on games. cya
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Hi clone đ¤Ł, It's been a while, there is something I want to ask, can you please follow me in the vent.
Jeanne66:Im a cloneimage
But you can't really prove it tho, author could just call a random friend of theirs and make them confirm it for him lol. And what the other person said is true and you not denying it proves it further to me since it's weird to be active only on this new book lol. There's also the fact you have 0.7 hours read time reading 7 books on wn... Even ignoring all that your only proper comments are on this author's books and only this authors, other are joke reviews(5 star with text to fill in 140 characters) on popular or semi popular works.
SaintLolicon:it is fair, it is because I know and interacted with the author in discord. Second, I invited him to discord to prove it but he doesn't want. Third is, he accusing me or might be you also for a fake account lol, old webnovel readers have know some site that can help them in reading which I will not say. (They can guess what I mean) next, you can't base on chat alone, I can easily make a thousand of book read in the profile but i am lazy and also I'm confident that I have read more than tens of thousands of webnovel chapters where it is either in RAWS, or other site and lastly why he need to keeps saying DUMBASS, petty and even he showed up in this FF. If he don't like it, he can go. Or he wanted to satisfy his ego, I have interacted with different people, and half of the people who like to find trouble are definitely needed attention.
And only reason you're getting attacked by others is because you can't take this author's negative critique which only makes it weirder. It's fine to dislike a book and review it low too lol. That's how people see what book they like, if everyone just left and only did 5 star reviews what's the point lol.
SaintLolicon:it is fair, it is because I know and interacted with the author in discord. Second, I invited him to discord to prove it but he doesn't want. Third is, he accusing me or might be you also for a fake account lol, old webnovel readers have know some site that can help them in reading which I will not say. (They can guess what I mean) next, you can't base on chat alone, I can easily make a thousand of book read in the profile but i am lazy and also I'm confident that I have read more than tens of thousands of webnovel chapters where it is either in RAWS, or other site and lastly why he need to keeps saying DUMBASS, petty and even he showed up in this FF. If he don't like it, he can go. Or he wanted to satisfy his ego, I have interacted with different people, and half of the people who like to find trouble are definitely needed attention.
its warning so that people who dont like it dont read it and waste time. I wasted my time. it was a 3 star review but the author deleted it, for no reason other than it being 3stars. and it was the same thing. this review literally states everything thats wrong and is valid and my opinion. all the other reviews spam 5 stars and ignore major faults like 4 chps of stats [ and more in the later chps, it continues, many chps of stats [ atleast half or more in each chp ], 8 yr time skips with no CD, etc. And zero WD. u all argue over this retarded shit with me. I gave 1 star cause author deleted it for no reason, u are talking as if I bashed it. i gave a fair review but author couldnt accept it. also notice how people agreed with review? dont reply, no reason for this conversation to continue,. dont waste each others time.
Jeanne66:Dude seriously if you dont like the book just leave it ,if you like it then read it, its pretty simple, no need to go such a pointless argument about something stupid..
I think I have already said plenty of times to check on discord. Also what do I need to deny about? My time of reading? Bro, I don't think that Webnovel has all the goods that I like, also if I want to read, there is a website posting a unlocked chapters so why do I need to login? yes author can make that up, but aren't you forgetting about something? Why do this specific person, crying so much about it. If he didn't really want to go discord, it means that he didn't even know the author. And if he didn't the author, what is his reason because this is already useless when he posted this review. Hatred for deleting? It is already mean to me for making it as a issue, or maybe he is petty? or maybe a kid? Or do he just want to kill new authors? Or jealousy?
Inferno_Vor:But you can't really prove it tho, author could just call a random friend of theirs and make them confirm it for him lol. And what the other person said is true and you not denying it proves it further to me since it's weird to be active only on this new book lol. There's also the fact you have 0.7 hours read time reading 7 books on wn... Even ignoring all that your only proper comments are on this author's books and only this authors, other are joke reviews(5 star with text to fill in 140 characters) on popular or semi popular works.