Review Detail of Trajann_Augustus in Drip Work

Alright then, sorry if I prolong my review. Had a rough time scheduling my time since its the holidays but lets get down to business. I really like the fact it takes place in the 1940s America. Where we see gangs and criminals interact with eachother. Usually this is my jam and you killed the execution right. On another note, you have done an astounding job with the world-building but there are some snippets here and there that you could improve as you progress the story. Errors to point out: The grammar is alright most of the time but there are some minor details that jibbled my eye-sockets. Also try to seperate your paragraphs cause its not who you have to worry. I like long paragraphs but a majority of webnovel readers do not like their paragraphs long as it ruins their immersion to the story. Believe me, I am speaking from experience authors that keep telling me to shorten my paragraphs like this one. Other than that, stay fresh and keep it cool mate, I like how its going.