I will rate myself a five star. No reasons, simply because it's my book. I hope you guys enjoy it. I will use different Pokemon that are rarely used on fanfics and won't restrict it to Kanto or Jhoto regions.

Nothing surprising, I'm going to give this particular story a 5 stars rating. Not only because it is an excellent story, but also because I want to give a little support to the author. Not that I want to sound dramatic, but this novel is surprisingly one of the best pokémon fan-fics of this website. Which honestly, there's only 3 or 4 stories here that are actually decent. The protagonist, Jay, is a well written and charismatic MC that everyone will enjoy acompanying. The fact he has an actual personality, weaknesses and thoughts already makes him stand out from the majority of the MCs from webnovel. And if you're one of those readers that particularly dislikes overpowered protagonists and dumbass cheats, like me, then this story is definitely for you. Despite Jay receiving some advantages, they aren't overpowered neither does Jay relies on them for everything, completely different from... Well... 98% of the MCs of fan-fics xD. The author also got to include well written side-characters and antagonists that makes the story richer and more fun to read. So, you won't need to worry about losing IQ if you decide to pick this fic. And also, another excellent point of this story. The author clearly knows how pokémon works, both in reality and in the games, the way he manages to blend well those two concepts is already one of the major selling points of this story. And oh of course, we can't forget the fact that the MC's team is unique, properly balanced and stands out from all the pokémon fics I've read by this point. Also + 2, the author is a pretty decent person :) Keep up the good work, author!

The silly author forgot to put the "hidden gem" tag. You are a great author is one of the best pokemon fanfics that I have read, I do not care if you do not update daily, but please do not abandon it. Thanks for the effort and love that you put into the fanfic. If you want to read something incredible, don't waste your time and start reading this book.

Review after 18 chapters Kinda too early to give a review, but excellent story so far. Has a lot of potential to be an epic fanfic. I just hope the author keeps on releasing chapters regularly and doesn't drop midway. I'll drop another review (if story goes on for 100+ chapters) So far the MC is shown to be very realistic, the world of Pokémon is described very realistically. And MC is smart (not super smart) and has a lot of common sense too. Chp 18 released the first bad guy, but even he acted very smart (very cruel, but smart nonetheless). So lots of hopes from this fanfic.

Although there are a lot of mistakes in spelling this story has a lot of potential. Also I like how the MC doesn't get an overpowered system that lets him bulldoze and get op pokemon that aren't even in that region like a riolu in route 1.

Better than most of the pokemon fan-fics I've read and suggest reading it. My favorite pokemon fan fic so far. question for author: Did you drop the fanfic?

This is one of the best fanfic I have been reading lately. I hope the author doesn't drop this, a keeps going. You are doing a very good job. I recommend everyone to read this.

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I don’t know about what others aay but this is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. Among POKEMON fanfics this is the Best uptodate!!! Character is not OP Has a very good head on his shoulders and a reasonable,caring one. Story develops in a very satisfying way World description is great