Review Detail of Septic_Red in The Awakening

I am not going to review negatively your work because this story has a great plot, presents a quite nice concept. The main thing that concerns me is the fact that the story presents some big grammatical errors, which can be corrected easily by using Grammarly ( I have observed that English is not your main language by the thing you have done to the letter i). Also. The plot is quite lovely and the fact that you use multiple main characters thing is good.