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AriosAeonVonBelser
AriosAeonVonBelserLv43yr
2021-01-04 11:24

I read this upto chapter 10 and from what I red the mc is just basically copying Kizaru. I don't know what happen to his past life personality, it just disappear and got replace by the personality of Kizaru. Also he got the looks of Kizaru, his costume and everything. He is copying Kizaru cause he is a fan but if he copy even Kizaru's face and personality then I don't know what kind of fanaticism is that.

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VeganMaster
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109 Chs

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VeganMaster
VeganMasterAuthor

I didn't do anything creative with his powers at the beginning that is my bad. As for personality, I did say in a chap that their personalities are similar. Although later there is still some difference, I don't really know enough about Kizaru to copy him properly.

3yr
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AriosAeonVonBelser
AriosAeonVonBelserLv4

Well I'm still at chapter 10 but hope you make something that is not from Kizaru. Anyway the novel is good.

VeganMaster:I didn't do anything creative with his powers at the beginning that is my bad. As for personality, I did say in a chap that their personalities are similar. Although later there is still some difference, I don't really know enough about Kizaru to copy him properly.
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SlyImmortalDevil
SlyImmortalDevilLv11

Why though, anime characters are super weird, so copying them is very dumb. I will never understand why authors would choose to do this unless they can't come up with an interesting character at all.

3yr
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AriosAeonVonBelser
AriosAeonVonBelserLv4

I know, maybe using them for reference is good but if it is just copying the personality of other character and down to their look it will be just dumb.

SlyImmortalDevil:Why though, anime characters are super weird, so copying them is very dumb. I will never understand why authors would choose to do this unless they can't come up with an interesting character at all.
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ZEUS666
ZEUS666Lv5

The writing quality and the update are good. The summary of the 20 chapters is to train, defeat the villains and make you suspect that you are attentive. The MC is a masochist, the heroes call him worse evil than he has ever existed, despite getting his job done quickly without getting hurt or killed. And because of the forced way the author got him into UA, where he technically doesn't need to learn anything. At first I thought I would follow the vigilante route, enriching the story, but I decided to go the easy route. And not to mention that he let himself be discovered, a guy with the kizaru ability. MC's attitude is really complicated, he sometimes acts like a kizaru, and sometimes like a brainless idiot. I loved the beginning, but the last chapters are really maddening and I can't stand the mc. Keep up the good work of the author.

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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

interesting start when he starts as a vigilante and it became a generic mha fic when he decided to be caught and even faking his defeat to the hero and he became a hero himself so the author can just follow the plot

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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

i like it until the middle when he's still doing his vigilante worked and its quite different from all other fics but sadly the author ran out of ideas and decided to follow the generic route and join the UA

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soubhik05
soubhik05Lv4

Waste of time Bullshit story Pika pika no mi wasted on mc Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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VeganMaster
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SweetName
SweetNameLv4

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

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RockSaur
RockSaurLv2

Dude, please. Don't give up your job. The idea is real cool and complete, the Admiral in the MHA itself is pretty cool. According to these universes, there are no works in which personalities are transferred like this, if you knew how I yelled for joy when I saw the title, description and then read the first chapter. I beg and I beg you, don't give it up. Yes, there are mistakes, everyone has them, but I noticed that the chapters are getting better, so do it further. Canon. Bro, can you not interfere with Midoriya? I am always waiting for the moment when he will interact with the future class 1-A. Make him as tall as in the original, Kizaru is 3.02 meters tall. Do not interfere with the development of Deku and leave the main events, focus Allan on more delicate topics? Like: giving interviews, spending time with the family, getting to know Eri about the classes, going to Eri's school himself so that she can be proud of you or even how he reacts to his fans who dress like him, or to figures, raincoats, glasses similar to him. That would be pretty interesting.

3yr
uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

In the first chapter, the MC decides to go to the MHA-verse in order to have a peaceful life. Then, he promptly becomes a vigilante, running around left and right, and frantically trying to accrue power.

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Mepha
MephaLv1

How can you play it so stupid, I'm just at a loss. As if written by a 10-year-old child, holes in the plot. Unexplored ENT MHA, answering questions related to ent: This is fan fiction, everything can be different in it.... I'm what this is, this is one of the stupidest fanfics about MHA, I hardly read until the 7th chapter. Then I pass, good luck to everyone.

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