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ZEUS666
ZEUS666Lv54yr
2020-12-24 10:34

The writing quality and the update are good. The summary of the 20 chapters is to train, defeat the villains and make you suspect that you are attentive. The MC is a masochist, the heroes call him worse evil than he has ever existed, despite getting his job done quickly without getting hurt or killed. And because of the forced way the author got him into UA, where he technically doesn't need to learn anything. At first I thought I would follow the vigilante route, enriching the story, but I decided to go the easy route. And not to mention that he let himself be discovered, a guy with the kizaru ability. MC's attitude is really complicated, he sometimes acts like a kizaru, and sometimes like a brainless idiot. I loved the beginning, but the last chapters are really maddening and I can't stand the mc. Keep up the good work of the author.

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DjStylez
DjStylezLv11

I feel the same as Zeus the MC shouldnt have gotten caught, why did he immediately fight The heroes, instead of figuring a way out. Was he trying to get caught. Also why didnt he try to Separate himself from the yellow flash.

newthings
newthingsLv6

wow he got caught acting as vigilante? thats very unique XD

VeganMaster
VeganMasterAuthor

To be fair, there wasn't much figuring out to do if he wanted to escape. At that point, he was easily faster than All Might. It was more of wanting to get captured and going down with a fight.

DjStylez:I feel the same as Zeus the MC shouldnt have gotten caught, why did he immediately fight The heroes, instead of figuring a way out. Was he trying to get caught. Also why didnt he try to Separate himself from the yellow flash.
poorjoe
poorjoeLv1

exactly. that's what is not supposed to be done.

VeganMaster:To be fair, there wasn't much figuring out to do if he wanted to escape. At that point, he was easily faster than All Might. It was more of wanting to get captured and going down with a fight.
newthings
newthingsLv6

"It was more of wanting to get captured" what kind of wish is that?

VeganMaster:To be fair, there wasn't much figuring out to do if he wanted to escape. At that point, he was easily faster than All Might. It was more of wanting to get captured and going down with a fight.
Rapid_Cougar_3
Rapid_Cougar_3Lv14

kizaru is basically brain dead what do you mean he act's like kizaru and that act's brain dead there's no difference ahahah

TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

besides your grammar being fkng horrible i completely agree with you thats also why i quit this like a year ago

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