Pretty alright start, but with the second chapter it went downhill. Even after 14 years, he still hasn't developed his superpowers properly. There is also an issue with the pairing, which happens to be Gwen, who is 14 years (same age as MC's current life), but it was clearly stated in the first chapter that the MC is a "man". Either the MC is the pedo, or the author can't put his character together properly.
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