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Thats what happens when "authors" use ai without giving a shit about what they produce.

When she went through the ritual?

So is he still gona bang miranda or not?

It's only a cliff hanger when the story is interesting. But the gaps between chapters has killed that.

Sounds like a bunch of ai written garbage

50% of the way through the story and only a week has passed as a 9 yr old. Good luck on everything getting to meet harry before this mid author drops this book for being too grandiose and convoluted.

No one's going to mention that he keeps on calling Lucy, kusanagi instead of kusynada?

Seriously why does he give a shit what happens once he leaves. Is he the fuking tva or something.

Why would mc give a shit if he changes something in game of thrones world when he has told spoilers to ciri.

Not about Warhammer its about the quality of your writing. While being written well, its suffers from a lack of progression. Ie moving the narrative forward. If you can do that and not get bogged down in unnecessary status updates or 10 chapters of grind for the reader i will probably come back. Grind is good for the gamer my friend but not for the reader. Have a lovely day👌🏻