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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv141yr
2023-06-24 06:10

Nerfed MC. Don’t write about a reincarnated character that is kryptonian by nerfing him and by having him not do anything with any future knowledge. You might as well write about a Viltrumite because they are as strong but they need more time to get that strong when compared to a kryptonian. I give you full permission to delete my review if you either start having the MC use his prior knowledge AND use his kryptonian dna effectively (that also means his intelligence because he could team up with Dr Octopus and make sure that the sun doesn’t explode AND be able to create a suit that can harness the sun for his powers or just use his higher IQ)….. or if you change him to a Viltrumite because then the nerfing would make sense. I know you don’t need permission to delete reviews but it’s not a good look. Goodluck with your story!

Marvel: The Ghost

HairyPotah
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DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

yeah the start was fucķing horrible. acting like a normal 14 year old with no strength and killing off his friend. then there's useless gwen as an interest. Well glad I was forced to drop this soon so I didn't waste time

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HairyPotah
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Hey there, everyone! It's Hairy here, I've already received fantastic support from all of you, and I can't thank you enough! Your encouragement means the world to me. I hope you're enjoying the story so far, and plenty more excitement will come. Stay tuned, and let's have a blast together! And this isn't my first rodeo—I've dabbled in fanfiction on good old fanfiction net before. But let me tell you. Those stories were a bit on the dark side. Picture yourself reading them in the dead of night, clutching onto something, and hiding under the blankets with your white paper stuff ready like there's no tomorrow! But hey, things change, right? I've decided to go by a different name and embark on a new writing adventure. I've reached a point where I feel it's time to put those dark tales behind me. No more of that stuff, I promise!

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Retro_Plaid
Retro_PlaidLv4

Honestly this story seemed good at the start but it slowly developed as if he didn’t live a previous life and was still a kid. I believe the story would be much better if the MC was an OC in the MCU not reincarnated and doesn’ have future knowledge bc the way he is acting is too childish for no reason.

1yr
JaneJane17
JaneJane17Lv1

Looking promising, ngl. Would love to see more, keep it up! Also, don't make another ongoing story as you get better views please. I've seen a lot of these writers would just drop some of their works without finishing it!

1yr
Melitia_Snek
Melitia_SnekLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
SonoBello
SonoBelloLv4

Trash.A Kryptonian that doesn't have really superpowers and that is stupid like a piece cardboard, Bizarro is smarter than him

1yr
Eduardo_Fernandes_5285
Eduardo_Fernandes_5285Lv10

ISSO E UMA DECEPÇÃO COMPLETA , SE QUISER LER FIQUE A VONTADE MAS ESTEJA PREPARADO PARA MC COMPLETAMENTE IDIOTA E NERFADO OU SEJA UMA VERGONHA PARA OS KRYPTONIANOS

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Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv14

Personally, I think this book is unoriginal. I mean, my best friend dies and I see a beautiful lady and I immediately forget about it. There wasn't even any mention of him after that. Life just moved on. The SHIELD interference now even made it more unoriginal. I like the marvel comics and universe which ddeserves my 5 stars, but the rest...

1yr
LastGod
LastGodLv4

Giving someone the Heritage of one of the most powerful heroes ever. Then having him be an idiot vulnerable useless person. It's the quickest way for me to drop a novel.

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Meta0202
Meta0202Lv3

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GhostAKilla
GhostAKillaLv14

Fantastic that is all I got to say [img=update][img=update]

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