Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Heroes of Valor

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far and I am sorry if it's offending you: World Background: The world building in this one is fine and it described quite well. However there is a major drawback which is the world sometimes contains a lot of infodumps especially with the system itself or a lot's of explanation. The easiest way to avoid is using more showing more about the world, the environment, and the situation to make it more engaging. Character: As for the MC Hiroku, so far he is just okay and I do like the part of him saving the little girls. However, the direction for his character is not quite clear yet when he transmigrated to the new world. Therefore, I believe the author should focus and adding more depth with Hiroku to make him more interesting and standout than the other isekai type story. Overall, it is a nice Isekai novel and keep up the good work!! Good Luck!!