First of all, I am a bit tentative when it comes to plots like these. Especially those which are in first person narration. But what's interesting is how you have intricately managed to have a consistent and a smooth proceeding of the plot. The world background in your story is great because it is balanced and descriptive at the same time. Overall, solid job! Good luck!
Ruby
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