Review Detail of Xephotor in Recarnated as villainess (path to doom)

The buildup thus far is well told. The story is approaching it’s main arch. It will be fun to see what schemes and conspiracies unfold. The sentence flow is decent and matches the pace of the chapters. The story is easy to read as a result. The writing does suffer from some basic grammar mistakes. These mistakes will become obvious as you continue reading and writing. I look forward to how the story progresses. Keep writing and you will improve with time. You have storytelling talent and I hope you continue the novel.