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Daoist_CastleLv33yr
2021-03-15 15:33

Okay so here's the gist of it; -There isn't much misspelling though there could have been some explanation for some words and the technicalities for those who don't know 'Tales of Demons and Gods' and 'Library of Heaven's Path'. -The updates where consistent except for the last month, though I don't blame the author cause' it probably has something to do with life. -The development of the story is good, though the plot and relationship could have been slowed down or started differently, its still amazing nonetheless. -The characters description that the author provides is a bit lacking though it could be worse, at least you could have described their clothing and/or features. -The Background is still quite the same as the original so an average score is given Overall I think the story is good enough for people to read. It is enjoyable and interesting on how the MC does things as Shen Yue and tries to get strong and survive. This is the second ToDaG fan-fiction that I have read and it doesn't fall far behind it either in terms of being enjoyable.(The first one is titled 'Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods' by Wise_Snail)

Reborn as a Villain in Tales of Demons and Gods

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