A novel that is worth your time. Had better Grammer than most orginal novels not perfect but pretty good. Has a unique plot but it does have a superficial character the bully that seems to hate the main character for no reason. Overall has a lot of potential would recommend. My suggestion for improvement would be more in depth characters.

I've read till chapter 9 and I leave because there's nothing that I can relate to in the mc. He has no personality. The only thing we know about him is that he's fat, poor, have good grades, gets bullied and he's also stupid. Bye, I'm out...

So speechless. This book deserves a merit! Your writings flow is elegant and fascinating! I could feel the vibes of the story and the plot twists and turns is truly a rock wohoo! Guys, I recommend you all to read to this book you won't be disappointed trust me! This author deserves the best and his fluent words flow like a lake..I've been avidly reading this in the first place. C'mon try it out, you couldn't wait to find you along in the journey! The paragraph and writing isn't messy, no grammatical errors so far and very neat writing which pleasant in the eyes. It was portrayed beautifully ahh can't wait for more releasee hehe💗🎉🎉

Great starting out and really like the concept, I would definetly recommend to everyone to keep reading along with this story I can feel that it will be pretty fantastic

The dialogue and fight scenes are VERY bad. Even after 20 chapters I don't understand his abilities. The concept of the system is great, but the implementation of it in the story is not. I can't stand the really unrealistic characters and unrealistic dialogue. The writing quality isn't all it is hyped up to be either. Sure, the writer has virtually zero grammatical errors. However, that isn't all that matters with writing quality. It is too dull, boring, static. It needs to be more colorful and deep, but this is just... it feels like someone K-12 trying to write a book for a school project.

The execution was not crude nor awkward, the stability of the updates is quite good. However, even though this novel has 2 quite good points, I don't know why this novel has high-ranking at all. Maybe, others saw what I didn't see, felt what I didn't feel, I don't know. Perhaps I got tired of Mcs who have systems got little bean of brain in their ass, I don't know. The character design is quite good; bully, battle-maniac, idiots. Quite good combination.

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The story is indeed a piece of work very carefully designed to be called a novel. I was almost speechless while reading your novel. Hope you get more attention from the readers! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I am not up to date with the latest chapter but when I say it's the world and the main character is carrying this novel. I have never seen people who's first option in everything is violence even up to adults or people with experience. Like they're other options to these things. The only thing I attribute it to is that it's a different world from our own. I sincerely hope that the story just grows up a bit more and that adults act like they have experience and not kids trying to act mature. It's good novel it's just needs some restructuring with some of the characters.