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Review Detail of Salmon_El_Solomon in Vector Control in MHA [COMPLETED]

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Salmon_El_Solomon
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The world has too many flaws (if the villains that appeared in the anime are stronger, because they would follow the plot, being stronger it is obvious that their plans would change, their personalities, etc.) The character follows the canon and acts as a babysitter for isuku (beta), it seems that he had several personalities, it is as if the author did not decide what personality to give the mc, sometimes it is social, other antisocial, sometimes childish, other mature. at the beginning the story had started well but the further you progress the worse it gets, the inconsistencies of the character cannot even be considered comedic. Another thing that annoys says that he does not want to stand out and that his white hair is enough, he lives in a world where there are people who transform into animals or parts (Rumi, his companion who controls the shadows), plants (the hero who literally is a tree) and many more things such as horns (Eri), wings (hawk), tail (his companion), etc, which part of him would make him stand out, he is literally a secondary character that you would never notice, because there are hair colors to heaps in that anime.

Vector Control in MHA [COMPLETED]

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DJDAN
DJDANAuthorDJDAN

thank you for the detailed review

Ultimate_Ciel
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bruh read the last chapter of the book it explains everything also delete your review this 1☆ does not belong in this legendary book

Salmon_El_Solomon
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I do not understand your nonsense defense, you realize that you speak of the last chapter as if he had rewritten the novel, when in the last chapter I only add a note that basically says: well I had a basic and clear idea, but I could not express it well, He did not have a clear MC personality (he makes an excuse). Well so that you are not curious about the end here I will tell you, I am abandoning this fic and creating a new one, go and see it. PS: that's why my rating will continue to be 1 star. Greetings :)

Ultimate_Ciel:bruh read the last chapter of the book it explains everything also delete your review this 1☆ does not belong in this legendary book