Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here. For the story: If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels. Warnings: There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story. At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip. This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story. Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it! (For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)

and that's that huh. I'm going to assume you intended to take a break and it turned into an extended hiatus on this work. probably started writing another book? or maybe you didnt know where to go from here and didnt want to drop the quality writing just to churn more chapters out? Either way, I really enjoyed the story. There was more character growth in this short 200 chapter story than quite a few 1000 plus chapter xianxias... the story telling just seemed to improve with each chapter too. I found myself engaged and engrossed with the story, to the point where I didn't even notice the many grammatical issues. My absolute favorite part was the constant introspection of the main character. it really made the character come to life, and made me care for his struggles. While the world building was the weakest part of the story besides the grammar issues, it was not that bad and certainly served its purpose for the story. I wish you all the best Author, and maybe you will one day come back to this novel, inspired, and write it to a satisfactory conclusion. Afterall, we didn't even get to see Ayda meeting Dearie before it cut off! i looked forward to some cat fights between the two haha

I think this story deserve stars just because of the synopsis. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ------------——------------¯_____------__

Firstly the plot and the idea is very interesting. However, by reading around 20 chapters I still find the novel boring. Everything is too confusing and not explained properly, moreover, some things are too unnecessary descriptive. Overal while reading this novel I am 'always' asking the question wtf is happening? I don't know...I don't enjoy it right now, tedious perhaps? Anyway, when there are 100 chapters Ill come back and see if it gets better.

sigh ... don't be fooled by the cover. the focus of the story is totally different. also, it is such a hard read. the story development is abrupt. dialogue feels out of place. sentences are sometimes so long that they stop making sense. author Skips some things which makes us understand what was he trying to say. he sometimes writes totally opposite things what he meant. which leaves us with scratch our head. wastes too much time in describing things which r not done properly. and I don't know what the heck is going on in most chapters. sigh....such a disappointment. I recommend author to write smaller sentences. and readers to read comments so they don't get much confused.

To talk about his writing, he has a good grasp, but he makes it messy and very confusing to read. The goals are not clear. The mc is kinda boring. So if you looking for anything except these then the story is yours. But if you are looking for a smart mc and a constant development then it's not the story u should read.

I see the cover, i see the sypnosis. I see the cover, i see the sypnosis, again. I see the cover, i see the sypnosis, for the 3rd time. N this continued for a few moment. Yu want to know why?? Its bc I cant see the two big plot that was mention by author.

It's terrible. Don't even try. Zero proof reading, incomprehensible dialogue, none of the characters have a functioning personality, and even the smut is poorly done.

I forced myself to read this thinking it would get better but I could not get past chapter 40 I quit ,the author is has good grasp on English language but he tried too hard in writing this that it became something that normal person could not find this interesting , only if the writing was simpler and the plot a little more straightforward , I could have stayed but no , bye bye

This is just another lazily written system novel. These things appear like ants out of the woodwork. I am astounded that this lazy writing is still widely praised by hundreds of people. Then again these are the same people to enjoy an isekai novel about a main character being a stick. Overall the quality works on the site are terrible.