Item: City of Vengeance
Rating: 5
Author: TahsinHossain

TahsinHossainLv23yr

2021-05-20 14:35

Oh god. This novel is freaking awesome. The chapters are nicely named, the prologue, even though it was an info-dump, was written so well that it didn't feel like that at all. The writing quality is superb, and I loved how everything created a sense of tension, from the first chapter. The only things I'd suggest to change are the words "A few years from now". Usually, these words aren't used for describing something that is already happening (in the story timeline, the future is the present), so perhaps change it to something like "In the year 20XX". Just a suggestion, though. Otherwise, great work!

City of Vengeance

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