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shy_park
shy_parkLv143yr
2021-06-21 14:57

This story is really good. I like the plot and the chemistry, though FL's character is a bit childish and the ML just gives out a vague vibe that even readers can't full understand what's on his mind until 181st chapter. Another thing, there are a lot of side story, worst is that it focus a lot on annoying characters' story, that you just gotta skip those chaps. Tagged R-18 but it generally is wholesome. lol. forgive the perv mind but i did expect since it is tagged like that. In conclusion though, i can still see potential given the chemistry between the MCs so guess i'll still continue.

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Amyraluvsbts
AmyraluvsbtsLv5

I agree with the side characters part. They aren't likable at all. All those side characters storylines are based on the characters that I hate the most I'm the novel, like giana, Aiden, zia, ofcourse Aileen and Theodore. None of them are likable! I would have rather author made the side story about Ramon's mother and brother, even Hailee's wrestler friend is better character than all those annoying bugs. What irks me the most that author writes more about these annoying side characters than the main couple themselves and sympathize with their character more. I came here to read the story of the main, couple, not the third party giana who is trying to destroy their marriage.

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