Review Detail of Lit_Leveler in The Ancients World

My main issue is the writing style and how the author reacts to constructive criticism. Changing perspective in chapter is a more current writing style and is fine in 3rd person. It I'd OK when done in first person with others being 3rd. When everyone is calling themselves "I" the question is who is telling the story? Give character shifts all being I gets confusing. Makes it less enjoyable and screws up the flow and immersion when I have to figure out who the current "i" is.