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Lit_Leveler

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"Gnomes Rule"

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    Lit_Leveler1yr
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    The thing that caused him even more pain was the utter stupidity of the entire affair. None of the things that occurred were necessary. If only his son had just swallowed his anger and waited. If only he knew about the person he set up a match with. If only...
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented
    Ren's eyes pierced Silvia while Ragnar almost choked, repressing his laughter.
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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented
    "Of course. Leave it to big sister. That guy is a money mongrel. He will surely come if I offer him big bucks."
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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    Should get extra too... never know when having materials will help later. Kinda like keeping herbs on you.

    A few more days and he would have enough for the sword. However, he didn't simply watch metals for just the 21 swords. Now that mining was so easy, he wanted metal for the 45 swords that he would add to the technique to improve it.
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
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    Why not let little Daotiger, Pearl, try to help and practice?

    Ch 898 Mining
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    Cheat how? Using pills he already made? How would that even be cheating?

    "I heard about your arrangement with Elder Xuan. I will be making sure you don't cheat and do indeed make all the pills that have been requested," she said.
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    He could also just say "Oh well, I guess I need to leave and join a sect." I mean it's not like he doesn't have options.

    Alex felt devastated. Was there really no way?
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    So we are almost 100 in with very little progress and a race built for casting that wants to be a warrior. This may kill the story for me. I don't get all the struggle when this choice makes it all pointless. He already has to work harder for the same rewards, which makes little sense. Now he will give up on what may actually make some of that struggle worth something. I know the author may have things planned but this is 100 chapters with no clue what that plan may be.

    Ch 94 News and choice.
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented
    "Why do the sizes matter?"
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    it's so real. it's so real. it's so real! why is it so real!?

    'Ah shit, this isn't going the way I hoped.' Eldrian complained internally, again being caught off guard by how real this game was. He had hoped he would need to spend hours at most not days and maybe even weeks just to make some normal weapons.
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    What are they guilty of?

    Eldrian turned to the comments after having finished the post. Which seemed very much like a denial of guilt to him. Just as he started reading the comments he saw that a new post just made it to the top. Having been pinned by one of the forum moderators.
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Posted

    My main issue is the writing style and how the author reacts to constructive criticism. Changing perspective in chapter is a more current writing style and is fine in 3rd person. It I'd OK when done in first person with others being 3rd. When everyone is calling themselves "I" the question is who is telling the story? Give character shifts all being I gets confusing. Makes it less enjoyable and screws up the flow and immersion when I have to figure out who the current "i" is.

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    The Ancients World
    Games · easyread
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    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Replied to Elphine_5690

    If his sister was in the exact same situation he would attack anyone who didn't help her and condemn them for watching. Even if she wasn't a healer or they were somewhere that she was a stranger. It's a double standard. Do unto others and all that.

    'If she is so stupid that she prefers getting beaten instead of taking a Ballot, that's her problem. I don't plan on opening an idiot shelter.'
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    This whole thing is kinda dumb. Ren wants to make it up to Leo for the past but offers no Help to Roz. He knows they can make tons from info and book but says nothing. Leo trades millions for a no kick clause? Even seeing how Scar is acting and the "if he leaves on his own" comment... Isolde makes no comments about anything at all? Too much forced stupidity or inaction. Why is Ren letting people get profit from his information and why is he letting even scar take advantage of him?

    Ch 131 The Inevitable He Couldn’t Avoid
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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Replied to LilBigKnee

    simping over Mike ?

    Ch 131 The Inevitable He Couldn’t Avoid
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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented
    She, too, was upset and couldn't look at Leonel at the moment. Everyone should cool their heads. That was the best course of action right now. She thought.
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    So Saya...

    While Saya couldn't help but feel unhappy with Leonel, too. It was their chance to enter the guild without employing or paying someone monthly for a probationary status, and Leonel took it from them.
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Posted

    It was amazing, I have been enjoying the story a ton and it was getting much more interesting. Sadly, updating has fallen off tremendously and with short chapters, it seems the story has fallen. 2nd story by same author with this issue that I've read. Seems the focus is the new novel essentially killing this one.

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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    So is it just me or should he buy things in UVR to make the hotel even more appealing? Also, if you went through the process of starting a college on the island I am sure you'd get faculty no problem.

    Ch 80 Activating The VR Pod
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Lit_Leveler
    Lit_Leveler1yr
    Commented

    Okay, I'm lost. He doesn't want the family to know he has awakened early but he has to get the other blood from them? So they will know he awakened when someone sees him. Unless he has it delivered while he hides and he doesn't eat or has that delivered too for weeks+... Not quite getting the plot here.

    Ch 59 Awakening Successfully (2 in 1)
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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