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Should get extra too... never know when having materials will help later. Kinda like keeping herbs on you.
Cheat how? Using pills he already made? How would that even be cheating?
He could also just say "Oh well, I guess I need to leave and join a sect." I mean it's not like he doesn't have options.
So we are almost 100 in with very little progress and a race built for casting that wants to be a warrior. This may kill the story for me. I don't get all the struggle when this choice makes it all pointless. He already has to work harder for the same rewards, which makes little sense. Now he will give up on what may actually make some of that struggle worth something. I know the author may have things planned but this is 100 chapters with no clue what that plan may be.
it's so real. it's so real. it's so real! why is it so real!?
What are they guilty of?
My main issue is the writing style and how the author reacts to constructive criticism. Changing perspective in chapter is a more current writing style and is fine in 3rd person. It I'd OK when done in first person with others being 3rd. When everyone is calling themselves "I" the question is who is telling the story? Give character shifts all being I gets confusing. Makes it less enjoyable and screws up the flow and immersion when I have to figure out who the current "i" is.
If his sister was in the exact same situation he would attack anyone who didn't help her and condemn them for watching. Even if she wasn't a healer or they were somewhere that she was a stranger. It's a double standard. Do unto others and all that.
This whole thing is kinda dumb. Ren wants to make it up to Leo for the past but offers no Help to Roz. He knows they can make tons from info and book but says nothing. Leo trades millions for a no kick clause? Even seeing how Scar is acting and the "if he leaves on his own" comment... Isolde makes no comments about anything at all? Too much forced stupidity or inaction. Why is Ren letting people get profit from his information and why is he letting even scar take advantage of him?
So Saya...
It was amazing, I have been enjoying the story a ton and it was getting much more interesting. Sadly, updating has fallen off tremendously and with short chapters, it seems the story has fallen. 2nd story by same author with this issue that I've read. Seems the focus is the new novel essentially killing this one.
Okay, I'm lost. He doesn't want the family to know he has awakened early but he has to get the other blood from them? So they will know he awakened when someone sees him. Unless he has it delivered while he hides and he doesn't eat or has that delivered too for weeks+... Not quite getting the plot here.