Review Detail of easyread in The Ancients World
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I just want to say hello to all the people coming from my other work here on webnovel. I have deleted the 3 other 5 star reviews that this has gotten because I want people to start leaving reviews only after I reach chapter 50. I hope by this time I can get a translator and nobody has to use google translate, this way unbiased reviews about the writing quality can be posted. The story is easy to read and there are very rarely spelling or punctuation errors. If I miss spell a word or need to fix some math, just say the word or math problem in the paragraph comment and I'll fix. No need to write anything other than that. Please don't leave comments about the lore of gods and other deities. I have changed and described them differently in the story than in real life. Don't read if that offends you. Please only leave comments about characters, locations, story development and history of both the real world or Ancients World. I will delete any comments pertaining to 'Logic' or 'Grammar'. The story is very well written and there is little to no reason at all to complain. Hope you all enjoy the story and have a great day!!
The Ancients World
easyread
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Lokiana:hii I would just like to know what the original name in the original language of this novel is pls and thank you!!!!
I know, I just wanted to get a healthy start. I didn't want people leaving reviews when the story was so young. I also want people to have a clear impression of the story, I have taken really great suggestions from my readers and changed the story in some ways cause they were good idea's. I just don't like people who haven't written anything in their life telling me how to write. I think that's unfair.
MasterKai808:criticism is appart of writing.
easyread:I know, I just wanted to get a healthy start. I didn't want people leaving reviews when the story was so young. I also want people to have a clear impression of the story, I have taken really great suggestions from my readers and changed the story in some ways cause they were good idea's. I just don't like people who haven't written anything in their life telling me how to write. I think that's unfair.
easyread:I know, I just wanted to get a healthy start. I didn't want people leaving reviews when the story was so young. I also want people to have a clear impression of the story, I have taken really great suggestions from my readers and changed the story in some ways cause they were good idea's. I just don't like people who haven't written anything in their life telling me how to write. I think that's unfair.
I'd like to know, if mc had a item to get any wish and used it to go back to the past, 1- Could he have wished to "go back with everything I have" ? 2- Did he go back in the instant he received the item? Was he obliged to use it right then and now? 3- If he wasn't, did he prepare himself? If he could go back with certain skills, did he go after more of them to go back stronger? If he couldn't go back with anything, did he for example, gather all the knowledge he could in a compilation of the most important things and memorize it? Those are basic questions that I consider very important to decide if I should try it out or not. In a nutshell it's "Could he have done better?"
1. He was only allowed 1 wish, no ands or buts. That's why he choose to go back in time with no added stipulations. 2. If you read the story there is an answer to this question. 3. There is also an explanation to this question in the story.
MonoNautilus:I'd like to know, if mc had a item to get any wish and used it to go back to the past, 1- Could he have wished to "go back with everything I have" ? 2- Did he go back in the instant he received the item? Was he obliged to use it right then and now? 3- If he wasn't, did he prepare himself? If he could go back with certain skills, did he go after more of them to go back stronger? If he couldn't go back with anything, did he for example, gather all the knowledge he could in a compilation of the most important things and memorize it? Those are basic questions that I consider very important to decide if I should try it out or not. In a nutshell it's "Could he have done better?"
Dont force yourself to do a romance only go for it if you feel like it, that kind of stuff is hard to write, so dont stress yourself out about it. If you do start a romance start out slow, and get a feel for the small stuff first.
easyread:I might, really depends on how I develop the story.
