Review Detail of Vymlock in Shinobi Prince (Naruto FanFic)

Man I enjoy your story,it is very well written and it is born from an original idea few people has dared to portrait on Narutoverse fanfiction. Just make a better use of the MC's starting position of a Daimyo's heir and explore new fields other writers haven't done before,like showing the life in the court,interactions with nobles,the exploration of the Land of Fire's feudal system,the burdens of rulership... Tenshin is not a civilian or an orphan who wants to be a ninja,he is lucky to be royalty and while the Konoha training arc you have already started is a thing you should remember what Tenshin has waiting for him back home,all the responsability he will have back there. A strong Daimyo that wields both courtly power and ninjutsu is a good goal to strive for,a good manager and a warrior all the same. Just continue and listen to comments like mine that only want for the story to be unique,to improve do not fall on the usual badmouthing shits that make Web Novel their home. As a Writer one has to search for good criticism among insults,I wish people was more behaved but it is what it is and you must not let it keep you down man. Best Wishes! And please do not let Tenshin's tale end with this nonsense.