Vymlock
Asoiaf,Naruto,Pokémon and eroge fan,good writing is always welcome by this avid reader and part-time writer.
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I suppose mainly because they like Charlie as a character specially compared to Reene and want to do some justice to the poor treatment he received from Bella during the series.
Of course you were owed an educated and civilised response at the very least. Honestly? I would try creating an original setting similar to HOTD but with its own peculiarities,it is a vastly exploited scenario and putting/honing your talents as a writers with your own content is always far better than keep toying with overwatched animes. Nevertheless no matter what you decide,proops to you for actually reading the reviews and learning from them like a good writer should.
A-Orphanage I want more of Shinji's background and learn more about the circunstances he had while growing up,perphaps some family hints?Show us the roos of the hero! Also the quest/story is really cool though Iam surprised to find something like this on Webnovel as this is more SV/SB/QQ' s domain.
Don't let wear you down mate! No matter what happens one should always priorise their happiness,stay strong,fight back and you shall see how better days are just around the corner. All my support,draw all the strength you need and slap life itself back!
With more flexed chapters and better grammar I would agree but the presentation is the Webnovel average and that's usually bad news.
*You committed an affair You've become an adulterer The second one is the correct form,you truly were confused writing that one eh author?
By the gods! Are you truly a Web Novel moderator? They finally did it the madmen,monotoring the content more closely which on this case is to be commended as it was the prime example of intolerance and blatant disregard of other people's cultures and identities. Still I am worried moderators will end up being petty censors that would limit the page's creativity or Hunting dogs that persue old vendettas. The creation of the role does worry me quite a bit,I understand its purpose and I am not that much of an active user yet roles like this one often end up evolving into straight up tyrannical and arbitrary behaviours.
Living on an European country on a middle sized city I have never seen young children involved in work not on shady deals of any shape and manner,14/15 years old teenagers are the norm where such things are somewhat visible which is concerning enough without involving the youngest out there.