I think the way you narrate your story and the word choice you use is very beautiful. From the very first section, I was captivated. As you mentioned in your synopsis, your work is poetic. However, I do wish some of the paragraphs were broken up into smaller ones š . It can get quite overwhelming reading such a large blurb of words. But overall, Iām enjoying this piece!
PrugnaKerai
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