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Review Detail of oceansage in The Legend of Astra

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oceansage
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Although story is good and writing is great, the amount of plot holes is so massive, that its feels like the story is made up off all the plot holes glued together. And mc character makes it even worse. How the hell can anyone be okay after becoming a slave and being treated as such. Mc wasn't born a slave in this different world, but got turned into one by his own stupidity and he is okay with that.

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The Legend of Astra

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Yeah...it actually concerns his personality a bit, but it will make much more sense in the later chapters. Thank you for the review anyway👍