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Item: His Dangly Bits and Her Front Bottom
Rating: 4.8

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Dick_WoodsLv13yrDick_Woods

Romance mixed with mystery; a typical medieval folktale. It is a great start. But i think you have to craft the language more for your ***** readers. Keep it up!

His Dangly Bits and Her Front Bottom

Kwasi_Anto2Hia

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Kwasi_Anto2HiaAuthorKwasi_Anto2Hia

Thanks, Dick. The story was originally crafted for young readers. I will work on your suggestion.

3yr