Romance mixed with mystery; a typical medieval folktale. It is a great start. But i think you have to craft the language more for your ***** readers. Keep it up!

Interesting. waiting

I would have rated you five stars if the update is regular. It's quite unusual for Chinese women to fall for African men, so I think this is going to be unique. I want to see how you develop this magic to the end.

wow!

Amazing. The language is simple and it flows smoothly. Character design, starting from chapter two is perfect. I believe this story has a deeper meaning. It is likely to have a good market in Africa. A trade publisher should consider this.

Good beginning; great suspense. I am glued.