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KumThrone
KumThroneLv24yr
2021-03-23 04:39

If you're looking for another Star wars fanfic, here ya go. If you're looking for a... rather sensible? Star wars fanfic.... it is gonna be a Hit or miss. 50/50 the whole half and half! If you're looking for a... rational MC? Eh.

Star Wars: Astra Eternum

AnAmericanBoy
4.5
24 Chs

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AnAmericanBoy
AnAmericanBoyAuthor

I'm planning on redoing this. This was for my practice, I thank you for your honesty. Biggest thing with Malekith is that I made a character I'm incapable of comprehending. This is an awesome review.

4yr
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KumThrone
KumThroneLv2

Please note, Anything that i did say in a comment of a chapter is just my thought at the moment. This review is my honest thought. Thank you for replying, I really do look forward to the redo.

AnAmericanBoy:I'm planning on redoing this. This was for my practice, I thank you for your honesty. Biggest thing with Malekith is that I made a character I'm incapable of comprehending. This is an awesome review.
4yr
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AnAmericanBoy
AnAmericanBoyAuthor

The first chapter is....rushed. But I'm trying my best! If anyone has any feedback, I'd love to hear it. I'm not going to shy away from criticism.

4yr

shiro_43
shiro_43Lv12

not a fan of the mc he is pretty much a masochist enjoys pain? It just starts off with a torture scene then the mc just joins them meh not the kind of character i can really connect to ........

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mila_islam
mila_islamLv13

This is One of if not the best star war fanfics after the first Couple of chapters the story really pikes up and so far its really interesting and new so to the author you are doing a great job and I'm really enjoying the story so far.

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Holypotato
HolypotatoLv4

Very enjoyable story so far. The beginning was a little odd but past that everything is pretty good. The story is well written and IMMERSIVE.And updates are stable with great joy and anticipation I am waiting for continuance of books performance.

4yr
Daoist411430
Daoist411430Lv2

una historia muy interesante me gustaria verle crear su propio seguidores como el imperio eterno la antigua republica tenia a darth revan satele shan i otros si necitas justifica r la creacion de un ejercito puedes utilizar las forjas estelares i deberias añadir romance satele shanXmc

4yr
Daoist708179
Daoist708179Lv3

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4yr
stinkclaw
stinkclawLv14

if i read Properly this is a Knights of the old Republic Storyline not many people are doing it I hope to see it continue good luck author..

4yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

Quality work,would like to see more.

4yr
Zarosian
ZarosianLv14

excellent story, the plot is developing quite nicely, and its a proper story with actual good deep and juicy lore!! and its not one of the ecchi trash where the mc is constantly going after sexual partners! its an honest to god lore friendly star wars AU, with reincarnation as a premise ^-^

4yr
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