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2021-03-09 20:29

after finished the raw I found author ended the story hastly there is tons of unsolved questions with out answers , last 70 chapters have no meaning just MC keep getting stronger and stronger without Equal and no challenge. even author said he quickly finished the story . story not worth reading

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Frankly I only gave five stars to update stability because of the translators. Otherwise the rest is SHIT. Don't read below is you don't want to be spoiled. SPOILER ... ... . . . . . . . . OK. So I read the raw and man. This story end at CH 500 or so. For a Chinese story this is already very low. Since generally they reach 900+ at minimum. Still at the start the story was interesting. The system was OP but he still had some limitations. He was OP but could still be threatened. The characters were funny and had some life. What is more ,it is a single pairing so the fmc had the time to be developed. All that though, is only applicable to 1/3 or half of the novel. Until then, the growth of power was acceptable. Fast but acceptable. But after a while he began to jump level without any real consolidation. Meaning we readers cannot even appreciate his new level before he jump to another one. This was the first hints that this story was already falling apart. All the side characters began to fall on the way side. The story became stall many plots were given up without closure. What's more, with his system you would think that myth is the last level? No it isn't. Myth, eternal, master, suprême, chaos. And do you know how long it took him to go from myth to chaos? Less than 40 chapters. 😂This should already explain everything. At the end, nothing was explained. The system wasn't, his many inheritances weren't, and so many many many fucking things. To be honest, reading was just a chore for me because I had invested too much and wanted to see the end. Lol even the author gave an excuse note because of how shitty the late arc were. Je recognized that he had basically gave up and was just rushing to end fast

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