Review Detail of Wolfbro in In Harry potter as Sirius black

Item: In Harry potter as Sirius black
Rating: 5

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WolfbroAuthor3yrWolfbro

Just me the author shamelessly give myself 5 stars but seriously in reviews give me what you think I need to improve on and what I've done well this is my first story and I'm just trying out my skills.

In Harry potter as Sirius black

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WolfbroAuthorWolfbro

I know when I was writing the chapter I felt like the sentences were to long but since it was my first story I was just focusing on spelling

Tanaiste:Try this thing called punctuation. Your paragraphs are long run-on sentences and that makes it hard to read. Break them up into smaller sentences and it'll be a lot better.

3yr

TanaisteLv3Tanaiste

Try this thing called punctuation. Your paragraphs are long run-on sentences and that makes it hard to read. Break them up into smaller sentences and it'll be a lot better.

3yr