Review Detail of DaoistRu30rN in An unknown world (Short Story)

Wow, you have a short story for your novel 'An unknown world'! Cool! I like how you think of making a short story for it, because the main story seems to be really serious in the later chapters. But I am also pretty surprised that it doesn't seem to have any connection to the main story and that the characters are coming to life as they are discussing about the novel. Good job! Keep it going!